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    this one's, like, 5 minutes old. literally. -g.

    prayer for lost souls

    we used to talk
    like lovers,
    friends, or even
    brother and sister. but now
    we pass like lepers, each too
    wrapped in his own
    misery to
    acknowledge the other.

    i used to be saddened by this.

    now, however,
    i can't even remember
    your face. you are like
    a chair in a doorway, rain
    falling against a
    windowpane?something
    i saw once or twice but
    never thought much
    about. your face isn't
    familiar anymore.

    i can't even remember your name.

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    wow. i've definitely felt that before
    well done gollum

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    ouch!

    but yeah, very well-put

    mooooving.......

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    reminds me of jim croce. i like it quite a bit. keep up the good work! and i know that you always will.

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    Gosh, this one brought back memories.

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    Oz, you hit the nail on the head!!!
    i thought there was something familiar in it, you're right it is reminiscent of Croce.
    thanks for pointing that out, might not have caught it on my own

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    Another triumph for Gollum.

    take care

    ---jones

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